HowTo talk:Start a revolution

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From Pee Review[edit]

Humour: 7 Not necessarily hysterical, good at several points.
Concept: 8 I liked it. I was half expecting phrases such as "they say you want a revolution" or "wellll you know, we all wanna change the world" I didn't and was thus disappointed. Obscure references are good- when well placed. (opinion) still good nonetheless.
Prose and formatting: 8 Pretty good. for some reason I liked everything up until the possible slogans part. was funny, but could easily been made one section and a few other things bothered me. "But what if I am a woman?" makes up for it.
Images: 6 Good pictures, especially for probably googled ones.
Miscellaneous: 8 An article overall worthy of an 8
Final Score: 37 I liked it. If you have any more ideas this article is good, but can be made great with some work I think. Do please make Make up a clever slogan and possible slogan one section however you can, and come up with some more even better ones.
Reviewer: The preceding unsigned comment was added by Leatherboundbooks (talk • contribs)


Leatherboundbooks Stop forgeting To Sign Or I'll Tell Dad--→☃☭Mr.Huffy☭☃← 09:56, 25 April 2007 (UTC)