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I completely reworked this article, but it needs a bit of expansion. Any ideas?--- Jaques Pirat IS NOT FRENCH! TP, F@H 20:37, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

Do you have a mental picture of your imaginary "Englandland"? What is the punchline of your joke? If you don't have these thing, there is simply no way to expand the article - you know. -- Colonel Swordman 10:17, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
I did not create the article(I could've nerved it it was so bad), but the puchline of the joke is of course it being a section of "Euroland", a theme park like europe, only bigger with better rides. I am horrid at image editing(case in point, see Image:spaceheater.png), so an englandland picture would be out of the question to be made by me, but I'll see what can be whipped up in image request.--- Jaques Pirat IS NOT FRENCH! TP, F@H 16:54, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
To be honest, the redeeming value of this article amounts to a penny. The whole thing is confusing and directionless, and it fails to give people a good reason as to why they should laugh. Dot points are good as long as they are straight to the point, otherwise, as in this case, they are just random humor. Unless you have a very good idea as to where to start and what to say (Mental picture!!), don't try to save the article - go and find something else to do. -- Colonel Swordman 09:04, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
Well, I completely redid the article with the pictures given from image request. Random humor has been whipped out, and this version should be much better.--- Jaques Pirat IS NOT FRENCH! TP, F@H 22:26, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
Hmmm... Now that's what I call "a good start"! -- Colonel Swordman 05:48, 7 June 2006 (UTC)