Talk:Miserable Son of a Bitch
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Miserable Son of a Bitch[edit]
Rewrote this article in a new light, and a number of people on IRC liked it. Though it would be good to get it reviewed. - 
Admiral Enzo Aquarius-Dial the Gate 
16:30, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | What has been wrote so far is a good standard, but you need to add to it |
| Concept: | 8 | The general idea, I think, is very good |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | The prose, spelling etc. is fine, but this article is far too short,see endnotes1 |
| Images: | 7 | The images are good but don't add humour. see endnotes2 |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I like the 'links approved by...' part |
| Final Score: | 32 | This article has potential but needs to be extended |
| Reviewer: | --El legend 21:38, 14 September 2007 (UTC) | |
1. The main problem with this article is length, if you need inspiration for other sections you may want to consider looking at other articles about dogs, or look at an article about a specific breed of dog on wikipedia and see what sections they have. You could do a bit about the temperament of the dog, perhaps showing how some everyday activities are awkward because of the dog being such a miserable bastard.
2. Not everyone thinks images need to add humour, I for one don't, but lots do so really it's down you wether you want to keep it the same or not. Seeing as Shakespeare owned one, you could make an image of him doing something funny with his dog. You could also make an image of someone worshipping 'her bitchiness'.