Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:TheWikiMan026/HowTo:Get rid of Jehovah's Witnesses
HowTo:Get rid of Jehovah's Witnesses[edit]
Please see if it is HowTo worthy.
Talk 16:14, May 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewed[edit]
How and why is it funny? Any suggestions?
This article is funny at times. The 'two words' punchline works well. But 'Jesus Loves This Article' is dumb and unnecessary.
How good is an idea behind the article?
This is a great idea for an article, but sometimes (such as the introduction) is a little too abstract. I think it would be funnier if it were less about Jesus and more about being rude to Jehovah's Witnesses.
How good does it look and how well does it read?
The grammar is often awful. Once I've reviewed this I'll correct some of it.
How are the images? Are they relevant, with good quality and formatting?
There are no images, unless you count the 'Jesus' thing, which I said above was dumb.
An overall summation of the article.
Obviously you recently very critically reviewed an article of mine, and might find it funny that I am now trying to take the moral high ground. I would probably consider this a 'mixed' review, with the worst part being the terrible grammar.